maybe you should enlarge (or lessen the size of the texture a bit, so you get less smaller beige spots, and more larger areas of that..) further, without the trees, and brightened a bit, i looks sweet!
Terrible... absolute crap... in fact Ive shit better maps and im not even a map maker!...
Ahaha! gotcha! just kidding it looks swwwweeeeet as usual forboding, sweeter than my extremely sweet cup of english tea in fact!
looks like just my kinda map.