Bori mission dialogs 1, 2 and 3

[hughperkins]

Want to write a mission, and looking for a scenario and dialog to implement?

Here are some mission dialogs you can use, entitled "Bori 1" and "Bori 2". The mission dialogs are made available under a Creative Commons license.

I'd anticipate that it could be possible for different people to implement these dialogs as missions. To avoid confusion, please add a suffix to your missions to identify them uniquely, eg "Bori 1 Tom", or "Bori 1 BlueThunder", or whatever you like. Please keep "Bori x" as the prefix.

Bori 1: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dhgqmctz_1gxbmxrcf

Bori 2: http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dhgqmctz_2j7bv4vgq

Edit: edited thread title to add Bori 3 mission

[Lumpy]

Put paragraphs between " "

Ie

"I really think you need to put paragraphs in your writing"

"yeah that would be a good idea"

[lurker]

I made some images to help. :D

[hughperkins]

I made some images to help. :D

Hehe, cool

[hughperkins]

Created Bori 3, The Radar Tower:

http://docs.google.com/Doc?id=dhgqmctz_3zqqt37fg

Also, changed the license to allow derivative works, which seems somewhat essential if these are to be used for maps/mods :-D

[Tribulexrenamed]

kind of slow sounding, and some things teach the wrong ideas. Having a radar on wont let people locate you. Its like a guide for people who have never played a video game in their life, so telling them that radars help other people locate them is something they will believe in a real multi-player battle.

[hughperkins]

> telling them that radars help other people locate them is something they will believe in a real multi-player battle

Hmmm, that's a good point.

> kind of slow sounding

Ok

Thank-you for the feed-back Tribulex; I'm just learning, about writing, so it's cool to find out ways to improve things, and I appreciate your doing this.

Hugh