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[WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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Gota
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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Maybe make the pole a bit more complex?
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

Post by smokingwreckage »

The gun looks REAL nice. The tower could be a bit more detailed? Conduits? Elevators? Conning tower?
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

Post by Warlord Zsinj »

There is a high-poly version of the bertha visible in the TA starting movie, I recommend having a closer look at that.

Your remodelling is nice, but I think you've lost some of the important design aspects of this gun.
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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I don't know if I'm gonna make the pole more complex... I knew you'll said that I should but I think it has to stay a "simple tower". Anyway I'm gonna try something to make the pole looking nicer ^^

@ Warlord : ok ;(
Do you have any pictures of the high poly bertha ? I can't see anything during the 2sec that the bertha is showed in the TA intro video ^^
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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I think the gun looks increadible, but the base of the tower needs something else.
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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http://cremuss.free.fr/fodb/files/bigbe ... nder/7.jpg

Some tweaking...
Old at left, new at right
Better ?

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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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http://www.planetannihilation.com/galle ... still1.gif

You can see that there is somewhat more of a curved/polygonal aspect then a boxy, angular design on top.
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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Maybe just a thicker base with a couple of strut things would work.
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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Cremuss: looking good. Just a bit more visual interest in the new version, thanks to the Pole Enhancement. I like it.
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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I think you have it done well in the new one, it doesn't have to be exact remember just needs to looks good, which it now does :)
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I think it looks good, but I think it's missed the aesthetic of the bertha, and the aesthetic of Arm's stuff. If it's not trying to be the bertha, then it's a nice heavy gun - a bit boxy for my tastes, but otherwise nice. If it's trying to be the bertha, then it needs more work.
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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It really looks like a bertha, it just misses some of the details the bertha has.
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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Yeah ok, I'm gonna rework on the bertha now, after a quake 3 game.

Don't worry if there is not a lots of updates. Annihilator, nukes and safe geothermal are already done but I want to finish the bertha first before posting pictures :)
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

Post by very_bad_soldier »

I really like the Bertha! Great work!
Your Kbot fac is nice too but I think its missing some details like some antennas or satellite dishes or something like that. It looks a bit "flat" but still quite sexy...
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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I think I've finally got something looking much better. I've just remodeled the gun.

Old one at left, new at right.
http://cremuss.free.fr/fodb/files/bigbe ... nder/8.jpg
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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Without a doubt it's improving. It still doesn't really look like the Bertha, but I think that's ok - mods like CA are trying to move away from TA anyway. It at least looks a lot more like an Arm unit then the original.
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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The rounded back looks stupid imo, i still preferred the squared back it makes it look more meaty like it is supposed to be.
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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I'm leaning towards the Squared looking back too, but both models are sweet regardless of which one makes the final cut.
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Re: [WIP] - My TA re-modeling and re-design

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CAn you please remove those wings on the tip of the barrel?
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