Im comming for you Alantai!!!!!!

[Zoombie]

I am trying as hard as possible to outrunn Alantai Firestar in sheer number of annonying, insitfull, and totaly insane posts. HELL iv brougt up three ideas i think are realy swell.
1)Space Combate
2) Haveing LOS being represented by static, so if you move out of your field of vision, the camera fades into a crakling snow of static. Cool eh! IT FITS PERFECTLY WITH TA's atmoshere
3) Underground Tokamacks (raise your hand if you can spell Toakamacks right, and ill give you a cooky... in spirit)


also dose anyone use the phrase, swell or gee wilikers! anymore. Or how about quaff. Mmmm i quafed the pill with a quick effecency

[amekkawi]

Well, in my opinion you are well on your way to "outrunn" Alantai!

What probably impressed me the most was when you started a sentence in all uppercase (already a plus!) and then ended the sentence in lowercase.

However, I have a few tips:

• Proofread less! This can be easily accomplished by making sure to keep your eyes on your keyboard at all times while typing. Accidentally reading what you type is the number one cause of corrections. I was able to understand a few sentences from your post, which have me a little worried that you may be proofreading.
• Stop using punctuation! You're doing a great job by making sure not to end questions with question marks, but you should try not to use any punctuation at all. This will help to keep readers confused and avoid helping them understand where sentences begin and end.
• Watch what you misspell! Many people are used to common misspellings of words such as "the" and "definitely". Misspelling these words does not confuse readers in most cases. It's best to misspell words that are not commonly misspelled, such as "does", "cookie" or "crackling".

Hopefully these tips will help you achieve your goal! All-in-all, I give you a B+!

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Sarcasm aside, I would like to make it clear that none of the suggestions above should ever be followed.