Spring RTS Engine

Bookcover...

Kitsch?
Definatly.
Needs a Rework?
Absolutly.

Right Direction?
Not Sure.. that´s the Part you step in, comentkill it, reanimate it, do it again... but no harsh words or you will be drowned in Trolltears

I'd vector the bird-thing at the top to get rid of the kinks in the outline for starters

yep, that´s on the to do lists first place, comp

A burning mountain being shot at by lasers with a giant flaming golden eagle on top?

I don't see how anyone could think that's over the top.

Machio is right
You need some tits too

At least somebody recognized it... and as it has to sell someday (far off into the Future) i can´t do to it what i did to the Maps...

Althoug i will think about Tits for the Eagle

Constructively though, the mountain needs way more texture
it looks really smudged and painted atm

Everything about it just seems terribly contrasting. It looks like it's divided into several parts to me - The top swirly third of the sky, the middle third of the sky with the lasers, the bottom third, the mountain, and then the bird, all of which look completely separate from all the other parts (except maybe the top of the sky and the bird sort of go together).

Maybe some info about the theme/tone of the book would help?

i think when i look at it the mountain stands out more than the eagle does.