offering proofreads

offering proofreads

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KaiserJ
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offering proofreads

Post by KaiserJ » 11 Apr 2011, 21:03

i've noticed in your posts that you've mentioned that none of your team are native english speakers; while you do a good job of communicating your ideas, it might be helpful to have someone to help you check over the "official" documents that you'll eventually wish to present to potential players...

as a native english speaker and a fan of the dune series, i would be happy to help with reading/editing when the time comes. cheers! (and yes i can use caps lock when its absolutely necessary 8) )

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Re: offering proofreads

Post by Jazcash » 11 Apr 2011, 22:11

Yes, I can also speak english 8)
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Re: offering proofreads

Post by KaiserJ » 11 Apr 2011, 22:21

idk if you want jazcash, he puts little hearts over his "i"s and "j"s and sometimes even draws little faces inside the "o"s
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Re: offering proofreads

Post by Jazcash » 11 Apr 2011, 22:48

KaiserJ wrote:idk if you want jazcash, he puts little hearts over his "i"s and "j"s and sometimes even draws little faces inside the "o"s
That's true except the 'o's. I draw ^.^'s inside <3's though. I'm just that cool.

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Re: offering proofreads

Post by Neddie » 12 Apr 2011, 07:37

I'm also interested, and Kaiser and I can probably work well together. Anyway, that will be really far down the line. In the meantime, can't wait to see what pops up!
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Re: offering proofreads

Post by KiviTheBird » 12 Apr 2011, 14:19

everyone will be free to correct mistakes in my translated data. or give more understandable explanation witch i will include
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Re: offering proofreads

Post by PicassoCT » 12 Apr 2011, 15:33

KiviTheBird, are you trying to avoid your first flamewar?

You ve got to chose a favourite among those translators, so that the others can swear eternal venegance. Im neither a native speaker, nor will i stray true to the original document, but i d┬┤like to throw my head into the ring, just for the hell of it.

This is why we cant have spice things. Arrakis is not legit- it haz worms.
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Re: offering proofreads

Post by KiviTheBird » 12 Apr 2011, 16:43

everyone will be free to see game plans data and share their minds about nore comfortable explanation. It is more useful way to correct my bad language
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Re: offering proofreads

Post by KiviTheBird » 12 Apr 2011, 16:53

to help you check over the "official" documents that you'll eventually wish to present to potential players...
I am showing it to coders, who will code the game. There are enough promotion to players in web
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