Spring RTS Engine

So, instead of working on the game (because that'd make too much sense), I've been doing some writing. Set in the Conflict Terra "universe" that oksnoop2 and I laid out over a year ago, it is my attempt to create some backstory. It's something I've really wanted to do for a long time, and a recent creative push has actually rendered some product.

I ask that those who are interested here give it a read, and give some constructive feedback. I am actively working on this; when I'm not actually writing for it, I'm usually pondering what I'm going to write about. So if you like it, please subscribe or whatever so you can keep updated

Chapter 1: Insomnia
Chapter 2: Test Pilot
Chapter 3: The Encounter

PS - didn't feel quite right putting it in the CT subforum as it is not directly game related, I imagine it's fine hanging out here in Off Topic

Generally nice.

Only one criticism comes to mind: Some of the paragraphs could be broken up more, especially where dramatic effect is called for. Good examples would be the first paragraph of chapter 1 (contrast the "2:59 .. 3:00" with the "3:07... 3:08" later in the chapter) and the last paragraph of chapter 3.

Are you planning on doing more?

Thanks for reading, and your input!

Good criticism, I feel I am only mindful of my paragraphs half the time.

I am definitely planning on doing more, although the content/aim of the next "chapter" is currently a toss-up.